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Snark Attack: Does UCLA Research Dissing Technology Bomb?

Published January 29, 2009 @ 02:22PM PT

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[Update 5 Feb 09: Some great push-back in the comments below state that the Science Daily post to which this is a rebuttal is not a good summary of the original research. I've changed the title of this post to reflect that info. Read comments by Jennifer and D'Arcy for more - and more questions their comments open up.]

Okay, I just read a study that put me on Code Red. All sorts of ed sites are giving totally unquestioning air time to a UCLA psychologist's new study just published in Science - and summarized here on Science Daily. I haven't read the study itself, only the Science Daily summary, so I don't know who should be in the cross-hairs of the following rant-buttal.

The headline and lede are real beauts (emphasis added):

Is Technology Producing A Decline In Critical Thinking And Analysis?

As technology has played a bigger role in our lives, our skills in critical thinking and analysis have declined, while our visual skills have improved, according to research by Patricia Greenfield, UCLA distinguished professor of psychology and director of the Children's Digital Media Center, Los Angeles.

Learners have changed as a result of their exposure to technology, says Greenfield, who analyzed more than 50 studies on learning and technology, including research on multi-tasking and the use of computers, the Internet and video games.

While I'm still calm - I'm writing this intro last, having already finished the body below - maybe I should invite you to go read the full article yourself, and let me know if you, like me, found no evidence of "critical thinking" in any test cited as evidence in the "research." All I found was memorization, "right answers," factual recall. If there's more "there" there, please point it out in the comments. Go ahead. I'll wait.

Why does this "research" deserve a full aerial assault?

Because it's going to be used by reactionary clock-turn-backers, with no pedagogical experience with laptop learning, to oppose pulling our 19th century classrooms into the 21st century. You want to encourage more drop-outs, figurative or literal, from today's schools? Then deny their students the use of all the technological tools they - and we - use outside of schools. Stay schooly. (What's with those high-tech school buses, anyway? Let's go back to covered wagons for school transport.)

Bombs away:

I will not pull my hair out as I make this point: that thing called a “book” is a product of technology. In all fairness, maybe the article meant to use “electronics” instead of the term "technology." A quibble, I know. Just warming up.

Bomb One:

Reading for pleasure, which has declined among young people in recent decades, enhances thinking and engages the imagination in a way that visual media such as video games and television do not, Greenfield said.

Um, people who surf the internet sort of, you know, READ there - presumably for pleasure. Unless they surf at gunpoint.

Bomb Two:

How much should schools use new media, versus older techniques such as reading and classroom discussion?

Why “versus”? This technology thingy you and I are sharing right this very moment is called a “weblog.” And that thingy you’re doing this here minute is that old-fangled thing called “reading.”

And, you know, if you comment, and others and I reply to your comment, that’s called “discussion.” Sheesh, I'm sorry to be so snarky, but really - am I crazy for saying it's deserved?

Bomb Three:

"No one medium is good for everything," Greenfield said. "If we want to develop a variety of skills, we need a balanced media diet. Each medium has costs and benefits in terms of what skills each develops."

Schools should make more effort to test students using visual media, she said, by asking them to prepare PowerPoint presentations, for example.

That’s great advice - for 1990. How about digital storytelling, student films, re-mixes? And if you’re going to stress presentation skills with Powerpoint, please, please, please do not teach students that text-and-bullet-riddled slides - what all adults who’ve suffered it too much fondly call “Death by PowerPoint” - is the path to career success. Point them to TED, for example, where some of the world’s most interesting thinkers give “presentations” that TED (and I) prefer to call “talks” - without PowerPointlessness - using, above all, good storytelling and public speaking skills. Or show them Larry Lessig, the master of minimalism in Slideshow presentations, by happy coincidence, giving a TED Talk:

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Or marketing guru Seth Godin (also on TED):

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Bomb Four:

"As students spend more time with visual media and less time with print, evaluation methods that include visual media will give a better picture of what they actually know," said Greenfield, who has been using films in her classes since the 1970s.

"By using more visual media, students will process information better," she said. "However, most visual media are real-time media that do not allow time for reflection, analysis or imagination — those do not get developed by real-time media such as television or video games. Technology is not a panacea in education, because of the skills that are being lost.

Arg. Yes, visual input - and aural, by the way, and physically manipulable - help us all process information better. But to say that “most visual media are real-time media that do not allow time for reflection, analysis, or imagination” is just so wrong. I know this from my own teaching practice, in which I deploy that high-tech gadget called the “pause button” to stop the freaking video or audio every time I or a student want to, to discuss whatever just happened. Or write about it in notes or quick journaling.

Bomb Five:

"Studies show that reading develops imagination, induction, reflection and critical thinking, as well as vocabulary," Greenfield said. "Reading for pleasure is the key to developing these skills. Students today have more visual literacy and less print literacy. Many students do not read for pleasure and have not for decades."

So let me get this straight: Electronic technology, which has been around at its current ubiquitous level for less than a decade, is implicitly responsible for a decline in “read[ing] for pleasure” that has been going on for “decades”? Let’s follow the bad logic here to a better hypothetical cause for this decline: schools frequently kill the joy in books by making reading “schooly." You know: “Fill out the work-sheet. Write an essay on the symbolism. Get ready for your quiz" on whatever random detail teacher decided should have stuck in all students’ memories - while dismissing the facts that a) teacher has memorized every detail, because s/he has probably taught that same book so many years s/he could recite it in his/her sleep, while his/her students don't have that advantage; b) the students had so much other homework that they had to speed-read the pages at home to get to their other assignments, or to c) read that book they want to read, instead of the one teacher forces them to read.

And let me point out, again, that the young are reading up a storm today. They’re just doing it online. That’s problematic in many ways, but so is the book-reading schools so often pervert through their schooliness.

Bomb Six (In which we consider the nuclear option):

Among the studies Greenfield analyzed was a classroom study showing that students who were given access to the Internet during class and were encouraged to use it during lectures did not process what the speaker said as well as students who did not have Internet access. When students were tested after class lectures, those who did not have Internet access performed better than those who did.

"Wiring classrooms for Internet access does not enhance learning," Greenfield said.

Restrain me, quick, before I break something. Because there’s a missing element in this bit of sloppy science that makes me want to throw my beloved laptop through the window. It’s this: the freaking teacher. So let me correct this: “CLUELESSLY wiring classrooms for internet access does not enhance learning.”

I won’t stop to question the implicit endorsement of lecturing as good teaching here, though I’d like to. I will say, though, that if a teacher wants students to listen to a lecture without distraction, I’ll share my brilliant technique for making that happen (I taught in a 1:1 laptop school).  Ready? TELL THE STUDENTS TO CLOSE THEIR FREAKING LAPTOPS UNTIL THE LECTURE IS OVER. (Okay, I’m calm. You can untie me now.)

Bomb Seven:

Another study Greenfield analyzed found that college students who watched "CNN Headline News" with just the news anchor on screen and without the "news crawl" across the bottom of the screen remembered significantly more facts from the televised broadcast than those who watched it with the distraction of the crawling text and with additional stock market and weather information on the screen.

These and other studies show that multi-tasking "prevents people from getting a deeper understanding of information," Greenfield said.

I remember CNN’s coverage of the presidential debates, and how those blasted audience graphs meandered up and down like drunken worms - green worms men, red worms women - throughout the whole thing. So fair enough. BUT. This is still sort of lame. Web video can be replayed to our mind’s content, until we feel like we’ve mastered the content. So if the study above was a one-off showing of CNN, followed by a memorization test, big whoop (and again - this is "critical thinking"?). It’s totally schooly, and divorced from the authentic uses we put this stuff to in that non-school place called the real world.

School Me:

I admit I'm sensitive about all of this. But it's not without reason. I've taken UCLA online courses by esteemed older professors whose use of technology reminded me of geriatrics I've known trying to figure out a DVD player. And they're the ones in charge, in the worst cases, of our schools. I shared an experience along these lines on my other blog, where I gave a report of my experience at the teacher recruitment fair I went to in Bangkok a few weeks ago:

Schools touting themselves as “21st century schools” and banging their laptop program drums - and during interviews with which I expected flower petals to descend from on high - on an occasion or two turned out to instead voice sentiments belonging to, um, people who’d obviously never experienced the literacy magic that happens after a few months writing and conversing behind the wheel of a blog. No rose-petals there - instead, many mental leaves of wet cabbage and other assorted offal fell, probably, in both our imaginations.

So my point: The internet is a revolution in literacy that dwarfs that of Gutenberg 500 years ago. And barring something apocalyptic, electronic media will only continue to eclipse print in years to come. Schools can deny that fact if they want, but they'll have no better luck than the Catholic Church did denying heliocentric theory for 300 years after Galileo (the Church took Galileo's works off their Index of Forbidden Books in the 1990s).

More pointedly still: Creating an opposition between "critical thinking" and "reading and discussing," on the one hand, and electronic/social media on the other, is a logical false disjunctive (in plain talk, a false either/or). Any competent teacher can use the new literacy tools to create new possibilities in critical thinking, reading, discussing, and more, that were only dreamt of in pre-Internet philosophies.

So if anybody trots that UCLA study out to oppose modernizing classrooms with the thing that's replacing the book, please feel free to trot this reasoned little rant out as a counter-argument. (You can show them this and this as examples to support the tech-to-teach-critical-thinking argument, too.)

Dr. Strangelove screenshot by Acid Zebra

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Comments (41)

  1. Betty Gilgoff

    Bravo Clay.  I too found my blood boiling as I read the article. Like you I have not yet read the original study but will do so to see what the article missed. Clearly if we are to believe that "peer review" means anything, the article had to have missed something in the study. Luckily Sharon Peters (twitter: speters) had sent me the link to this post where you've done an excellent job of identifying some key concerns. 

    I would add that with the growing interactivity of the web, I have become more and more a proponent of multi-tasking as a way of fostering and increasing critical thinking and engagement. Now understand, I have long fought a against enabling "multi-tasking" as per my initial foray into blogging on livejournal at http://bgilgoff.livejournal.com/ where I wrote a post about multi-tasking versus flow. More recently though I have had opportunities to participate in web casts and even live lectures (note the word "participate" here!) where the audience/participants have been engaged in a live chat during a presentation.  Clearly it requires the ability to multi-task. One has to follow the lecturer and the chat at the same time, and then is encouraged to also add to the chat, and often engage with the speaker as well.  By participating in that, one is constantly thinking, questioning, engaging. In fact it takes real concentration and focus in ways that simply attending a lecture, watching a powerpoint or reading a book does not.

    Thanks for your post.

    Posted by Betty Gilgoff on 01/29/2009 @ 03:34PM PT

  2. Clay Burell

    Betty, you add insights on "deep multi-tasking," I want to label it, that I hope everybody reads. Great comment.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/29/2009 @ 05:21PM PT

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  4. Ron Amos

    If the person who designed the study isn't Internet literate it's very unlikely that the study will reveal anything that makes sense. We have this new and unique way to approach learning and understanding, the old methods just don't fit. Gaia is growing a brain, no point stopping now.

    Posted by Ron Amos on 01/29/2009 @ 05:19PM PT

  5. Clay Burell

    Great last metaphor, Ron.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/29/2009 @ 05:24PM PT

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  7. Mark Pullen

    Best post ever.  This is not only a marvelous rant, but also a constructive manifesto about the need for technology in schools.  Absolutely love it.

    Posted by Mark Pullen on 01/29/2009 @ 07:09PM PT

  8. Clay Burell

    Thanks for that, Mark. It's wonderful when people take the time to give positive feedback. It helps.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/29/2009 @ 08:26PM PT

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  10. Charlie  Roy

    @ClayBravo! and bravo again!  I'd love to see you and Gary Stager in the same room and video tape the rants.  Passionate, to the point, and a fabulous rebuttal.   
    The bit on reading on the web is great.  I had one of my teachers complaining last week that these kids don't read.  They rolled their eyes and then I asked them how many read something on line last night and learned something new.  They all raised their hands.  

    Posted by Charlie Roy on 01/29/2009 @ 08:32PM PT

  11. Clay Burell

    Charlie, I would have loved to have seen that dialogue with the students. (And me and Gary together on video? You're making me think of Jack Black in "Be Kind, Rewind.")

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/29/2009 @ 08:43PM PT

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  13. R. R.

    This was an excellent read.  I just want to add a comment, from the perspective of a senior who goes to a cyber school.  (Haha, I'm reading for pleasure - and about education.  Fancy that?  :D)

    "Reading for pleasure, which has declined among young people in recent decades, enhances thinking and engages the imagination in a way that visual media such as video games and television do not, Greenfield said."

    When I went to a regular public school, I did not generally read for pleasure because too much homework was assigned for me to have any time for it.  From the time I got home, until the time I went to bed, I usually had reading, papers, questions, study guides, projects, and other things that I had to work on, for at least four classes.  I worked hard as a student then, and I work hard as one now.  I love reading for pleasure, if not entirely because of technology.  Not only do I find books online to buy at a store, but there's tons of things to read for free online.  I read more now, than I probably ever did when I went to a brick-and-mortar school.

    I'm also offended as an artist wanting to go into the gaming/entertainment industry.  Upbringing and culture, encourage imagination in a way that printed words simply cannot (at least for me), and I honestly can't learn about these very well from books.  Books are limited, an abridged version of what the internet can teach you (about some things).  It's just about properly utilizing the tool to learn in the class room, entertain in the home - this goes for both computers and books.  Books need help if you want us to read them, and we’re not just gonna degrade to them because some studies say so...  Computers need help if you want us to learn on them, and use them properly in the class room.

    "Studies show that reading develops imagination, induction, reflection and critical thinking, as well as vocabulary,..."

    This one is just generally silly, the internet allows plenty of room for picking up on all of these things.  Art, writing, reading, poetry - how many of thse things have huge communities dedicated to them?  Do these sites not inspire?  Do blogs that pose intellectual questions not make us think critically?  Are there not sites completely dedicated to dictionary and thesaurus resources out there?  I mean, nothing beats reading something online, not knowing a word, and typing "define:____" into google, and knowing what it means in less than a second, right?  (Okay, maybe utilizing that word in an essay, and making your teacher go "wow" does.  ^_^;)

    "Schools touting themselves as “21st century schools” and banging their laptop program drums "

    ...Technically, ...it's an mp3 file, not a drum.  :)

    Anyway, forgive me, I'm rambling and it's almost 2 am...  Kudos for this, it made me think critically.  (Haha! :) )

    Posted by R. R. on 01/29/2009 @ 11:06PM PT

  14. R. R.

    * I just want to clarify that I'm in my senior year in high school, not an elderly person... ^_^;

    Posted by R. R. on 01/29/2009 @ 11:07PM PT

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  16. Ron Amos

    R.R. good read, I am an old person myself in my 70s, I am a high school dropout.  Education in the meat space world of the 1940s was mostly arguments from authority, government propaganda and religious non sequitors. So as soon as I could escape the schools, I thought of them as prisons of the spirit. My real education got started, until the invention of the internet I read on average a book a day, many days more then 1, I worked at hundreds of different jobs in a lot of different industries.. It was a glorious trip, now that the internet is getting to run better and better my learning has accelerated even more.

    Posted by Ron Amos on 01/30/2009 @ 05:43AM PT

  17. Clay Burell

    Ron, Just a quick word to say I love the glimpses you give of your decades on this ball. They sound rich. Please stay around and say more.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/30/2009 @ 09:32AM PT

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  19. Rodd Lucier

    Is it too early to make nominations for "Most Influential Blog Post"?

    I'd be interested to see how critical thinking can be modeled by students who might use the very technologies cited, in order to draft responses to "Is Technology Producing a Decline in Critical Thinking and Analysis".

    Then we could compare these works with the objective analysis of a group of pen & paper equipped students!

    Posted by Rodd Lucier on 01/30/2009 @ 07:36AM PT

  20. Mark Pullen

    No, no... make it pen and paper-equipped ADULTS!!  The critics could be taken down by the very students and technology they criticize.  Pure poetic justice. :-)

    Posted by Mark Pullen on 01/30/2009 @ 08:36AM PT

  21. Clay Burell

    Thanks Rodd, Mark.

    You know, I wish I knew Michael Wesch so I could suggest he consider such a suggestion with his class....

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/30/2009 @ 11:45AM PT

  22. Rodd Lucier

    Mark, Something tells me that as much as the students would be up to the task, that there would be few takers from the establishment. ; )

    It couldn't hurt to make the suggestion Clay.  From what I've observed, Mike would be supportive of any of his students who would wish to pursue such an engaging project.

    Something tells me that if you were on the same continent, you'd already have crossed paths. At least you can see what he's up to... http://www.twitter.com/mwesch.

    Posted by Rodd Lucier on 01/30/2009 @ 12:30PM PT

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  24. Michael Doyle

    "Why does this "research" deserve a full aerial assault? Because it's going to be used by reactionary clock-turn-backers, with no pedagogical experience with laptop learning, to oppose pulling our 19th century classrooms into the 21st century."

    Clay, as one of your biggest fans who also happens to be a reactionary clock-turn-backers (though with a little bit of pedagogical experience), let me thank you for a marvelous attack on a blowhard piece of science.

    I just want to remind folks that some of us Luddites recognize books as technology, know a huge shift is occurring in technology, actually use (some) of the new tools, and wince when  the magazine Science lends credence to huff-puffery.

    I'm more worried about the technophiles who jump all over this (warranted) with their own mishmash of religious fervor than I am by anything a thoughtful blogger might post.

    It's been awhile since I sat in a Friends (Quaker) meeting. The local meeting is unprogrammed, which means we sit silently for an hour or so. Occasionally someone will speak if so moved, but most times little (blessedly) is said.

    The first few minutes I am incredibly twitchy, and cannot settle down until I remember I cannot settle down by trying, then am content to watch the sun beam creep across the bench in front of me.

    I stare out a window looking at a tree. A few telephone lines run by it--I think about the tremendous amount of information that passes through those lines every minute. Then I think about the tree.

    Both are marvelous things, the human wire, the mystery of trees, and both hold vast amounts of knowledge. The wire is ultimately knowable, the tree ultimately not.

    Bombing imagery in the context of a Quaker meeting jars, so let me gently stir the pot with a few thoughts on the responses your post engendered:

    1) Betty speaks of a wonderful form of multi-tasking, but I'd argue that is more the use of multiple tools for a single task. In the olden days we called it conversation, and conversation is a phenomenal tool for extending thoughts, no matter how it's done. Maybe "deep multi-tasking" is better labeled as "enrichment multitasking."

    Driving while using a steering wheel, the pedals, my ears and proprioception, is all focused on the same end. Driving while chatting on the phone has two separate ends. I consider the latter "multi-tasking," but not the former, but maybe I'm just confused.

    2) Rodd confuses the issue, and sets up a false dichotomy--pencil and paper does not preclude critical thinking, and higher technologies designed to write (word processors, for instance) do not necessarily help, though I do admit they make the task of writing easier.

    I also might add that adults is a subset of students, and that more than a few of us age-challenged still call ourselves students.

    (Oh, and Newton Einstein both used pen and paper--a cheap argument, true, but not a pointless one.)

    )n the other hand, I'd love to go to a pub with Ron and buy him a Guinness.

    And R.R.? It's young adults like you that allow me to sleep easier at night. Don't let the older folks offend you too much.

    Posted by Michael Doyle on 01/31/2009 @ 08:24AM PT

  25. Clay Burell

    Michael, one old fart to another ;-) :

    I think I should have said "from the 20th," not "the 19th," century in the original post, because all that paper talks about is TV, video, and games. It's like the professor found a ten-year-old study she'd forgotten to publish in the back of her desk drawer, and sent it to Science. TV and video games are 20th century. Apparently she's still there.

    Re: the bombing imagery: I know. I was just having fun. It was figurative, not literal. "The first person to hurl an insult instead of a stone created civilization," to paraphrase - who? - Freud? (You know I can only write if I find it fun, generally.)

    I love your distinction between "single-tasked multi-tool use" v. "multi-tasking," but.... I think Betty's example points to something qualitatively different than "conversation": chatting online about a presentationwhile simultaneously listening to it isn't a traditional conversation by a long shot. (And I'm not saying I'm wholly convinced it's an improvement upon conversation either, though I'm not saying the opposite, either.)

    Similarly, I think Rodd points to the network effect enabled by the internet that goes far beyond "word processing." Check out Michael Wesch's work (google is your friend) on this in his classroom.

    Gotta run to work. Good to hear from you. Loved the comment, and am as aware and ambivalent about the Quaker tree silence and the info-glut as you seem to be. But the times are the times.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 01/31/2009 @ 12:29PM PT

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  27. Michael Doyle

    Oh, one more point--Gaia has a brain.
    Humans are growing a network of information that is marvelous and fun and all kinds of things. But we're not Gaia--we're just a tiny part of it.

    (Hubris is going to get us kilt.)

    Posted by Michael Doyle on 01/31/2009 @ 08:31AM PT

  28. Penelope M

    Is it me, or is this article all over the place? They argue that video games are bad because most are violent and in the **next paragraph** talk about how video game skills can help surgeons. That's the worst example, but the whole article to me seemed to bounce between praising technology and blaming it.

    Your bomb six was the big killer for me--simply adding any tool to a classroom, be it a textbook or internet or SMARTboard or erasable pens without appropriate pedagogy and support for the teacher does not enhance learning. Duh. It's a *tool* people, and like any tool its value comes from how we, the intelligent beings, use it.

    Why is any of this news?

    Posted by Penelope M on 01/31/2009 @ 10:42AM PT

  29. Clay Burell

    Penelope, I found it all over the place too.

    Again, did you notice the breathtakingly conspicuous absence of the web in this?

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 08:34PM PT

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  31. Ron Amos

    Not necessarily hubris Michael..  a living organism is self organizing, the parts are each self directed though related to one another in an integrated functional unit. Big problem with meatspace education is the division of knowledge into compartmentalised segments with no obvious or necessary connections among them... leads children to scattered thinking, such scattered thinking leads to financial meltdowns like the current one because no one can gain a comprehensive knowledge how things work..

    I said growing because that's what living things do, if I had said we are building or creating or making a brain for Gaia then that would be hubris because it would deny an obvious element of knowledge.
    I have written about this here:
    http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1242517/cyberspace_nation.html?cat=9

    Posted by Ron Amos on 01/31/2009 @ 12:53PM PT

  32. Michael Doyle

    I don't deny that education in public schools has a huge probelem because of the insistence on compartmentalization--and I suspect that within 20 years (hopefully less, but it's public schools we're talking about) the artificial divisions will no longer exist.

    Thinking our efforts here contribute some type of knowledge to the living Earth, which has existed long before us (and will last long after we're gone if we don't destroy it) puts us up there with the gods.

    But it's quite possible I don't quite grasp what Gaia means.

    Posted by Michael Doyle on 01/31/2009 @ 01:42PM PT

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  34. Ron Amos

    That's the problem Michael, we treat humans as if we were not a part of nature.. as if we were not a part of the earth.. It starts for us as western world view folks with Genesis in the Bible where humans are told to fill and subdue the earth to have dominion over every living thing this sets us apart as if we are not a part of the integrated wholeness of what is. That's a bad idea and it's the source of most human and ecological problems. It may be that our self consciousness is the self consciousness of the universe, it may be that we are the universe being aware of itself.

    Posted by Ron Amos on 01/31/2009 @ 02:08PM PT

  35. Michael Doyle

    Genesis, when read carefully with attention to the Hebrew, makes more sense that King James would know.

    The western interpretation is what kills us.

    Souls (nefesh/neshama) are derived from both the dirt/clay and the breath of God, as opposed to the more popular western version where souls are the breath, and the dirt is something lesser. You could look it up (Gen 2:7).

    A better word for dominion may be usufruct.

    I trust the universe is already aware, whether or not we're here, but there's no way to know, so that's a religious point of view, and does not belong here (sorry, Clay).

    A lot of people treat humans as though they are not part of nature. I am not one of them. (Really!)

    Perhaps we should take this to a more private place--I do not want to distract from Clay's post. I'm at doyle.bhs@gmail.com.

    Posted by Michael Doyle on 01/31/2009 @ 02:51PM PT

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  37. Sean Nash

    Clay-  sorry for being so absent in the world of words I came to love this past year.  I was doing ok in the midst of this PERFECTLY SCHOOLY grad degree...  up until the point I had sweet little babe #2.  That has been more than amazing.  However, it has kept me from interacting with the two cyberblabbers I love most. 

    I have had this post open in a tab since you published it.  I only now read it.  I knew from the seven second skim that this was a keeper, so I kept it open until I could breathe.  This is so good.  It is funny reading your words in a different frame.  Odd how it changes tone ever so subtly.  That is exactly why I compose in a browser window as opposed to the safely of a word processor.  When I write online things change.  I like to use that.

    Anyway... enough personal reflection.  Keep up the good work here, and good to see MD (funny initials given history) here tearing things up as well.

    Sean

    Posted by Sean Nash on 01/31/2009 @ 08:41PM PT

  38. Jason Spivey

    Clay,

    I think you hit the hammer on the head when discussing how teachers use technology in the classroom. To play the devils advocate a little bit here lets take the following and put them in place:

    1. What do most schools use technology for?
    In more than one occasion I had teacher at my high school decided that they wanted a day off from lecturing and therefore put in a video. Sometimes the video dealt with the concepts other times it did not. So in looking at how teachers use media it could be because of ignorance, lack of vision or no motivation for learning that would create negative results in this study.

    2. What does going to a 1 to 1 school mean?

    This is a quote that I heard form an admin not to long ago about defining what a 1 to 1 school is:

    -"What that basically means is every kid has a laptop and uses it in class."

    Can I get a WTF?

    To expand on that, I have been in conversations with other education professionals, and on more than one occasion heard that at a 1 to 1 school taking a place where students take notes and create PowerPoints. So in the current school climate (based on ignorance of the tool at that they potentially have) the study could have a great point.

    I guess what I am trying to say is that YOU have a vision. YOU know how to use the tools that makes good WEB 2.0 teachers effective. But you are currently  not the norm (sadly) and without the spread of knowledge on how to make take advantage of these tools then the study could be write.

    I am an avid supporter of you and your work. And want you to have express the furry that you have in making this type of learning work. But the next question is how do we get people to listen?

    Take this for what it is worth! One love!

    Jason

    Posted by Jason Spivey on 02/02/2009 @ 06:41PM PT

  39. Clay Burell

    Hi Jason,

    Devil's advocates are welcome. That's what makes this all so different from the old ways of writing.

    So:

    1. I've known non-technological teachers to take the same sort of break by saying, "Free study perod today - or just relax and socialize. You deserve a break today." One teacher in particular was a great history teacher, and he didn't feel like this was "bad teaching" because he thought breaks in heavy parts of the calendar were good for students. So whether it's a movie or not, this sort of thing happens. And I'm not sure it's always bad. (I will say, though, again, that when I show movies, it's never without constant pauses, and often only parts of the movie instead of the whole.)

    2. That goes back to the "cluelessly wiring classrooms doesn't improve learning" line. PD, mentoring, admin support and vision are key. But you know that.

    Since you turned me on to Ali G, I'll close with, "Re-thpect."

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 06:40PM PT

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  41. Jon Mott

    Clay,

    I loved reading this post. I get so frustrated with this kind of watered-down, pop-science. Your dismantling of the piece is a thing of beauty. The only observation I'd add as a instructional technologist is the simple aphorism that you get what you design. If people design boring, process-driven, mindless "learning" experiences for students (with or without technology!), they shouldn't be surprised that students hate it (or quickly tune out when there's something more interesting to do, like browsing the web).

    This is all simply a design issue and virtually ever technology at our disposal is a design tool. If we want critical thinking we should design learning activities that promote and assessments that gauge critical thinking, using the appropriate mix of technologies. Technology can't do anything by itself, but it seems to be an increasingly convenient bogeyman for people who don't want to do the hard work of improving learning design and reforming education so learning--and not teaching--are the center of it all.

    Posted by Jon Mott on 02/04/2009 @ 12:11PM PT

  42. Deirdre Bonnycastle

    Thank you for writing this! On my blog I compared Prensky's new article on Digital Wisdom to this http://www.innovateonline.info/index.php?view=article&id=705&action=login 

    Posted by Deirdre Bonnycastle on 02/04/2009 @ 12:23PM PT

  43. J J

    Clay,
    I’ve been sitting on my hands for a few days wondering how and whether I should respond to this post.  I have watched increasing promotion of it on Twitter and through blogs and felt a strong desire to come here and respond in the comments.  I’ve read through your post and the comments many times in an attempt to compose my thoughts in a reasonable manner.  I admire your enthusiasm and commitment to making a difference in the world, through hands-on engagement with learners.  You have a strong following and a well-recognized voice in the field.  Some of my dearest friends and people I admire most are promoting this post and so I spent considerable time thinking of an appropriate response.
    You obviously feel passionately about your post and hope to generate discussion and action.  I was surprised to see you mention in the very first paragraph that you had not even read the study.  To me, this is a huge issue and one that would lead me to instantly be cautious of a rebuttal. Yet, I find the readers accepting and promoting your post as something of high importance.  Not only did you admit to not reading the study, you claim to have read a summary of an article about the journal article about the study.  I tend to be extremely cautious with evaluations so far removed from the original source.   I’ve gone back to read the 4-page sciencemag.org report on the study, and the article you reference has greatly misconstrued the original intent and language of the study.
    The second thing that bothers me is that for educators advocating for inquiry learning, the headline, “Is Technology Producing A Decline In Critical Thinking And Analysis?” ought to be an exciting stimulus to valuable educational discourse.  When I read that heading, I automatically think of opportunity, not “Code Red.”  What a great article to bring straight to students to let them locate original sources, context and discussion and discover their own meaning.
    Thirdly, I found your rebuttal surprising, in that it is essentially the foundational “ed-tech manifesto,” with language that has been used in this debate for at least a decade. Your arguments include the same content of a million ed tech blog posts.  You’ve not introduced anything new, nor encouraged critical thinking.  Both sides know there are good and bad examples of technology use.  Debating their examples of improper use with your examples of successful adoption neglects to address the real issues of inadequate administration and teachers, and technology adoption that does not take into consideration the individual circumstances in every classroom, school or other learning environment.
    My fourth concern is that you mention, “All sorts of ed sites are giving totally unquestioning air time,” yet you don’t provide any links to these sites.  If you truly feel the desire to spur action on the part of your readers, it might be nice to guide them to conversations where they can engage with those on the other side.  Bringing a passionate stance to those who already follow and agree with you will not lead to education transformation.  If this study has the chance of making the impact you foresee, isn’t this a huge opportunity to introduce your philosophies to those who are unfamiliar with your work?
    I want to know what we can do to bring these sides together to discuss opportunities for real educational research, sharing of resources and data and collection of success stories linked to data that will help educators determine the best technology opportunities for learning with their individual populations.  I applaud your enthusiasm and passion, but I do question your approach to this topic and wonder if there may be a better way to spread your message to those who have not heard it and adopted some of your successful strategies.  I do think there is merit in questioning the current state of educational research, as well as the quality and accuracy of the online reviews of studies.  I think that part of your message is valid, but also makes it even more surprising that you are debating an article so far removed from the research.  The original article features 56 references, so readers have ample opportunity to do more research and debate. I would encourage others to read it before heading out to the blogosphere to debate articles five times removed.

    Posted by J J on 02/04/2009 @ 02:02PM PT

  44. Clay Burell

    Jennifer,

    Great response. I addressed some of your points in my reply to D'Arcy below, so I hope you don't mind my pointing you there for points I leave out in this one.

    For your first point, see the reply to D'Arcy.

    Re: the second one - the summary title - I see your point, but want to push back a bit. The title frames a cause-effect argument with its question, then in its lede provides an almost-answer with a "post-hoc, ergo propter-hoc" ("after this, therefore because of this") insinuation that it doesn't flatly assert. Sloppy, in my book, and damnably misleading.

    Re: point three: All good points, but my purpose was to rebut the Science Daily post, not to deliver something "new." I gave a nod to the need for admin and training in the "cluelessly wiring classrooms" line, and the "online reading is problematic in many ways" line - as well as in the two final links.

    4. I just added a link to the Google search results of sites linking to the Science Daily article.

    5. Well-taken, again. I'll be the first to admit that I've got a Jekyll-Hyde personality when it comes to blogging. Sometimes I'm straight, sometimes I'm gonzo. Strangely, the gonzo pieces, warts and all, often get more attention than the straight ones.

    The nice thing about blogging, though, to return to the point that's so at the heart of much of this post, is that critical readers like you can come in and challenge any excesses and weaknesses. If only we were able to do that on Science Daily (no comments allowed), Science (pay-per-view), and everywhere else.

    Seriously, Jennifer, thanks for the push-back. Good stuff, and much of it deserved.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 07:28PM PT

  45. Clay Burell

    Jen, I know you wrote about the psychology of this exchange on your own blog (though I only discovered that by accident), but how about the substance?

    Any response to my disagreements or push-backs to the ideas in your criticism? Intellectual closure, please? It was just getting interesting....

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/16/2009 @ 07:07PM PT

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  47. D'Arcy Norman

    When critiquing a review of an article that suggests people are doing less deep reading, you open with "I haven't read the study itself, only the Science Daily summary." I love it. Perfect.

    Posted by D'Arcy Norman on 02/04/2009 @ 02:14PM PT

  48. Clay Burell

    D'Arcy, see my reply to your second comment below, and to Jennifer above.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 07:32PM PT

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  50. D'Arcy Norman

    I'm still trying to get my head around this one. I spent some time trying to find the original article to see what it was really about. Here's what I found.
    You wrote a critique.of a summary lazily republished by science dailythat was originally written by UCLA as a press releaseabout a journal article.
    There's a few degrees of separation there.
    The actual journal article isn't anti-technology at all. It's actually quite nicely balanced, framing issues of media literacy and relevance of student assessment.
    http://tinyurl.com/d98wfn
    It's a short read. Well worth it.

    Posted by D'Arcy Norman on 02/04/2009 @ 02:35PM PT

  51. Clay Burell

    D'Arcy, fair enough as far as it goes. Some responses:

    1. The disclaimer was there precisely to point out that I was responding to the Science Daily post. If your characterization of the actual study is right, then you answered the "who belongs in the cross-hairs?" question.

    I already made that point in a comment thread on a blog that referenced this post:

    In all fairness, though, we should be clear that I’m responding to the Science Daily summary of the Greenfield research. How accurately it presents Greenfield is something I don’t care to spend the money buying the article at Science to find out.</blockquote>

    2. The "why this matters" paragraph explained that the Science Daily summary will be used as ammo, not the study itself in Science. Interesting here: Science Daily has the same Google Page Rank as Science, but a higher Alexa ranking, so more people will likely have read the summary than the study. Pragmatically, I'd say that matters. People arguing against techonology for literacy will be using the summary more often than the study for their arguments.

    Moreover, the fact that the research was federally funded, but readers still have to pay money to read it in Science, is another interesting wrinkle. It's a bit off-topic, but a bit on-topic too: in an age in which "information wants to be free," the old "pay-per-read" model falls victim to the new resistance to that model. If the study were free, it would join many other pdf's in my hard-drive. It wasn't.

    Mark Pullen's comment below attests to the relevance of this wrinkle.

    I'm aware of all the gnarly issues about the economics of journalism, scholarship, and publishing that this brings up. This is an example of that.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 07:07PM PT

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  53. Mark Pullen

    to D'Arcy: sounds awesome!  I'll go read that article... oh wait...

    "24 hours access to this Science article [costs] US $15.00 from your current computer."

    On second thought, thanks but no thanks.

    Posted by Mark Pullen on 02/04/2009 @ 03:19PM PT

  54. Clay Burell

    Bingo, you wag.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 08:04PM PT

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  56. D'Arcy Norman

    fair enough. but if you couldn't read the article because you don't have access, the RED ALERT should have been something like "federally funded research locked behind pay login" - not a critique of a press release about an article, chock full of rhetoric and urgency.
    I'm not about to write a critique of something I haven't read, and I'm surprised at the activity this one received, given the article admittedly wasn't read. How does a critique like this help anything?

    Posted by D'Arcy Norman on 02/04/2009 @ 07:35PM PT

  57. Clay Burell

    I'd argue it helps by de-fanging the press release which, again, coming from Science Daily, will be more widely-read than the research.

    Posted by Clay Burell on 02/04/2009 @ 07:40PM PT

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